you know me and my journals about last minute homework help
in my writing class we have had to write about a place, a person, a voice, and an experience that changed us in some way. Now we have to hand them all in and they have to be perfect. please help me edit my papers. Even if you only do one paper, or even part of one paper. Any help is greatly appreciated.
Please point out things like if you think a point in the story should be more explained or even taken out or switched around. If you want to see more detail here or there or if its just grammar things.
Point out as much as you can, be as harsh as you can
Please read them here: [link]
You can either post critiques in this journal or in that thread. Please help me even if you are only correcting one little sentence or whatever!